x-factor11's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[How to Feed Depression 5]

hey, you're back!

I was beginning to miss your short stories, and now here they are again. Hope to see the end of this one soon :>.

Yoshiko13 responds:

yup yup! been a REALLY busy semester!!! gunna post all mei werk!! >u<)b

[Shaman]

You might have actually helped me out on something.

I was going to say that the hand should be clearer because it's closer, but it just hit me that if you're focusing your eyes on the person's head, it would be that blurry that close wouldn't it? For some that didn't register earlier, my mind is a deceptive fiend haha.

Good work :P.

xcrosspictures responds:

Well yeah, you're right. Though I should have spent a bit more time on the close-up hand. It ended up looking a bit motion-blurred too as it it was in motion. Still the white and sharp highlights sort of ruins that feel since they are so clear. So either I should have blurred out the highlights a bit, or spent more time on adding some detail to the hand.

[Charcoal Owl]

I'm not sure if you made a grid on the paper and used a photo as a reference, but even then you have one hell of a understanding on how to apply charcoal. It's so clean with such a smudgy medium haha.

CameronMc responds:

Hah no grid, but I did sketch it out with a graphite pencil before drawing with charcoal.
I also used charcoal pencils (black and white) on gray paper, so I managed to stay relativity clean.

[Megatron (HOC) Version]

Starscream

you failed me for the last time!

MindChamber responds:

he;s next!

[Abstract Lights]

looks like a dragon butterfly hybrid..

thing, yea..

DzGuy responds:

I agree.

[Kosmopolis Concept]

project freetown

is being destoryed by a lighting bolt?!
oh noez, but where will I get my young teen skating action? D:

AlmightyHans responds:

Nah, it's not being attacked by a lightning bolt. the bolt just struck something. it's just supposed to have a dark stormy feel. One of the focuses on the city is that it is incredibly polluted. so all the smoke clouds are from chimneys.